Author Topic: RISE - A Parkour Story  (Read 55557 times)

Offline Jordan Bates

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Re: RISE - A Parkour Story
« Reply #280 on: November 28, 2011, 06:23:42 PM »
This looks interesting..

Where can I read the whole thing

EDIT: Found it  :D
« Last Edit: November 28, 2011, 06:33:46 PM by Jørdan »

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Re: RISE - A Parkour Story
« Reply #281 on: January 04, 2012, 03:37:41 PM »
*Ryan begins chanting*
Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel.

*somehow a tribal drum is beat even though this is a forum*
Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel.

*eveyone else joins in*
Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel.

*a few of them have torches*
Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel.

*they come rushing at you faster than you expected, a massive hoard of screaming people*
Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel.

*At the last second they stop, then with wide open eyes they whisper*
Please?
What he said ^ one of the best stories I've read please make another

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Re: RISE - A Parkour Story
« Reply #282 on: July 11, 2012, 09:38:25 PM »
Truly amazing story. Read it in a day and loved every second. I'm really hoping for a sequel, by the way. :) Makes me want to just move. Ha

By the way, I've done this many times but never really found a way to explain it. But the part where it talks about thinking too much and just letting things happen really was one of my favorite parts. Sometimes when I do PK I just "go". You know what I mean?
« Last Edit: July 11, 2012, 09:40:03 PM by Pyro Zombi »

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Re: RISE - A Parkour Story
« Reply #283 on: July 12, 2012, 04:45:28 AM »
Just read the entire thing through.

Thoughts:
End of prologue: what a cliche formula/plot
End of chapter 1: damn this is pretty good
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End of Chapter 14: what? that can't be it, what?
Finding Chapter 15-17: Crisis averted, I was worried there for a moment, keep reading!
Finished: Damn that was awesome, worth every second

crazy awesome story, I'm not even sure how else to say it.  I couldn't stop reading.  Now I want to go out and train more  ;D

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Re: RISE - A Parkour Story
« Reply #284 on: July 13, 2012, 08:12:17 PM »
Hah I even forgot about this myself. Still hoping for more.  :P

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Re: RISE - A Parkour Story
« Reply #285 on: August 26, 2012, 06:47:48 AM »
Thanks guys! For all those who are looking for the complete story, need to catch up, or anything in between, here you go.

http://www.scribd.com/doc/33151063/Rise-A-Parkour-Story
http://www.scribd.com/doc/37006502/RISE-Chapter-15
http://www.scribd.com/doc/43943309/RISE-A-Parkour-Story-Chapter-16
http://www.scribd.com/doc/58869190/RISE-Chapter-17-Final

Even after all these years to hear that people still read this story and like it gives me a huge smile. :)
I have plans to one day re-edit and expand the story/characters into a proper novel, just trying to get real life into order.
And I agree, the prologue I originally wrote was pretty cliche. It was all I had at the time haha!